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A love so young yet a love so true
She can't imagine anyone else but you
You belong together so make it right
You get through anything and all lovers fight
You're made for eachother in every way
So listen to me and what I say
...
Take a chance dive in deep
Don't be afraid or begin to weep
She loves you you love her
Even though love makes you eyes blur
She will always be there by your side
Seeing you through and helping you hide
Go to her with stories not lies
Tell her your triumphs and fill her with pride
...
Take the next step jump from the rope
Tell her you love her I know you can cope
She's never been loved quite like you do
The other guys played her and were untrue
So take this chance to fall in love
And spread your wings like a little white dove
...
So that's what he done he took what I said
Put it into practice and didn't mess with her head
They'll stay together I know it will last
Without any pressure and not moving too fast
They may fight and they may not
But I know that to eachother they'll never be forgot.
©2005-2009 ~DeathBecomingReal
:icondeathbecomingreal:

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About a couple of crazy kids falling in love

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:iconcrazydays:
Hey man this really got into me. i was in a situation exactly like that but now it's just a feeling of loneliness. this made me think of what we had though and how i yearn more than anything to be with her again. peace
:icondeathbecomingreal:
hey i didnt realise my poems would effect anyone. when was u and this girl together? how did it break down? if u dont mind me asking.. thanks for the comment luv Kate xxx
:iconcrazydays:
together for 4and a half months up until 2 weeks ago but we were really into each other for ages before that.
not quite sure what happened. nothing bad cuz were still friends but its not the same and i keep it in me that she will wanna get beck 2gether again. off to meet her now actually!
keep writing. thanks
:icondeathbecomingreal:
aww dude! that's harsh cept that ur still mates. keep faith and hope i mean ya never no do ya?!?! just dont be too hopeful. i hope everythin turns out cool and if it doesnt work out i hope you guys stay good mates, it means alot to a girl when a guy can be friends, she will need someone to turn to, someone who can protect her and support her, she will respect you for it, juts talk it over when you feel its right, ya never no she may feel the same dude. well talk soon im guna check out ur work. I'll keep writing. good luck with meeting up with her luv kate xxx
:iconstoleninnocence:
I love this poem and you know i do, its so true you rock

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Kick the Darkness till It Bleeds Daylight

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